Thursday, 6 December 2012
Spending too much time on Facebook, perhaps?
Wednesday, 21 November 2012
Well done steak
Taken from http://blog.grammarly.com/post/36108547882
Tuesday, 20 November 2012
My Role Model
My role model is my sister. Her name
is Joy and she is thirty-years old. She is working as a lecturer in a local
university. She is very small and petite. She has beautiful black hair and the
prettiest smile I have ever seen. She is also very cheerful and it is no wonder
that she got the nickname of Joy. She is almost 10 years my senior and she has
made a great impact on my life.
She was diagnosed with cancer of the
breast at age 25. When my family and I heard the news, we were in shock and
distress. I was devastated. I felt as if my sister was going to die. I cried
and cried. I only stopped when she smilingly asked me why I was crying.
“I am scared that I am going to lose
you!” I cried with fear. She said calmly, ”Hey, you silly goose. I am not going
to die. I am just having a cancer. It is not life threatening. It is something
that can be treated. And if I had to get cancer, then I am glad it is breast
cancer because I can easily go for a mastectomy and get on with life. So, what’s
your problem?”
I stared at her and then started
thinking. How come she never cried? How come she never whined and complained?
How come she continued to bring joy to everybody’s lives? Where did she get her
strength from? What was wrong with me? Why was I crying like life has ended?
It was a very traumatic time for all
of us. She went through radiation, chemotherapy and the saddest time of our
lives was when she lost all her hair! Her beautiful black hair simply dropped
onto her pillow as she slept. I collected all her hair and I still keep it in a
bag! I just can’t throw it away.
But, she taught all of us lessons in strength
and patience. She taught us to laugh in the face of pain, hurt and fear. She
simply would not stay down. She bounced right back!
Even the doctors were amazed at her
recovery and ability to cope with the situation. My sister Joy made all of us
aware of all the fragility of life and showed that we had to be thankful for
every minute that we had.
We became one of the families who
laughed and celebrated a lot. We would find any occasion to give thanks to just
be alive because after all life is a gift.
Today, she is a cancer survivor and
is a counsellor to other cancer patients. I am totally in awe of her. From her,
I learnt to live life fully, happily and contentedly.
(458 words)
Adapted from Tutor Utusan Malaysia
Wednesday 6 August 2008
Sunday, 18 November 2012
The Cliff
One day, a despondent young man who
was bankrupt decided to end his life. He felt his life was miserable, having
failed in all his undertakings. He wanted to commit suicide by jumping off a
cliff that was a two-hour bus ride from his house.
The cliff was a famous tourist spot.
It overlooked a lush green valley and offered a wonderful view of the sea
beyond. Sometimes, if you are lucky, the reflection of the sun creates a
beautiful rainbow in the blue sky.
After a hearty breakfast, the young
man took the first bus that left for the cliff. It was 7.30 am and the bus was
quite empty. After a few stops though, the bus became crowded with people on
their way to work.
A middle-aged man in a security
officer’s uniform sat next to the young man and started a conversation. He said
after a big yawn, “Didn’t get enough sleep last night. The cost of living is
getting very high. I have to work two jobs to support my family and mind you,
my wife is also working. Only the rich can enjoy their life. It’s getting
tougher every day – what a world.”
The young man thought in his heart, “Yes,
and that’s why I am leaving it.”
The middle-aged man got off at the
next stop. By now the bus was nearly empty again, and thirty minutes away from
the last stop at the cliff top, an old man got onto the bus and sat in front of
the young man. It was drizzling then.
He was untidy-looking, his hair
unkempt, his shirt faded and stained and it looked as if he had not bathed in
days. Turning to the young man he said, “I guess you are going to the cliff
too.” The young man nodded coldly, remaining silent. The old man continued, “I’ve
waited nearly a year to come to the cliff. My children left me after they got
married and of course after getting their inheritance since all the properties
willed to them by their mother.”
“I was imprisoned in a posh old folks’
home. After some time, my children decided that I was becoming too expensive
for them, so they dumped me in a state-run old folks’ home. I decided then to
leave the place. I worked as a gardener and did odd jobs.”
The old man then asked, “Where are
you coming from?”. The young man said, “About 50km from here.” The old man
said, “I have actually come from 250km away and had to take a few buses to get
here. I skipped some meals to save enough cash to come here.”
The old man continued,” I remember
when I was small, my parents used to take me to the cliff to see the views. It
was a wonderful sight. The cool blue sky matched by the lush green valley
below. Sometimes the blue sky was dotted by spots of wild birds. I could see
the sparkling reflection of the sunlight on the sea. It was heavenly”.
Unperturbed by the young man’s scowl
and silence, the old man went on. He said, “I haven’t felt proper sunshine in
years. Our cities are choked with smog and the sky is polluted by haze. Thank
God I made it here today. I just want to see the view from the cliff so that I
know it’s worth living here on this great planet no matter what we go through.”
The old man then asked,” Are you
working at the tourist kiosk there?”. The young man paused for a moment and
answered, “No, I’m going there for the same reason you are.”
The rain had stopped by then. The sun
was shining again. As the bus drew to a stop by the cliff top, the bus driver
called out, “Hey, you guys are lucky. There is a double rainbow today!”
(649 words)
Adapted from: Leonard Selva
Gurunathan Heart & Soul Starmag Sunday
30 March 2008
Tuesday, 6 November 2012
Making A Difference
As much as I love inspirational
quotes and stories, I never imagined that someday, I would figure in one of
them. But life is full of surprises, so here’s my story.
The day started just like any other and
I waited patiently for the sun to go down so I could go for a dip. At 7.15pm, I
looked out the window and saw a beautiful sunset. It was my cue to head
downstairs.
As I approached the pool, I noticed a
young lady getting out from the other end. Well, it’s going to be me swimming
alone that night, I thought to myself.
I geared up and got into the pool
gently. Once I had gotten used to the temperature of the water, I noticed the
same person had returned and begun swimming. I could not keep my eyes off her.
She swam lap after lap without
stopping. Feeling a little let down by my own speed, I pushed myself a little
harder at the start of each lap, pausing occasionally to enjoy the view around
me.
After seven years of living in the
same condo, most people would have gotten tired of the same, although amazing,
view from my pool. But I never fail to gloat about it – it’s the main
attraction for anyone who visits.
I had planned on doing 20 laps. After
the 18th lap, I stopped to take a rest. It was then that the young
lady came up and started thanking me profusely.
At first I did not quite understand
her. She then explained that she had given up her passion for swimming some
years ago. But that evening, after a long day at work, she decided that she
would get back into the pool.
However, she was only two laps
through when everyone else in the water started to get up and head home. She
felt uneasy swimming alone and wanted to do the same. That was when she saw me approaching
and decided to continue with her laps as she now had company. My presence in
the pool that night had also inspired her to swim again, she added.
Her words caught me by surprise and
all that I could mutter was, “You’re welcome,” while flashing a wide smile.
As we both swam to the other end of
the pool, she whispered, “See ya,” before getting out. As I completed my last
two laps, I started thinking about what had just happened.
How could my presence make such a
difference in someone else’s life? After all, I did not offer her any
assistance; I was simply going about my own business.
Then it struck me that in most of the
stories I had heard or read, the characters were unaware of the effect they
would have on someone else’s life. It just happened.
Thinking back on that experience
still gives me goose bumps: what if I had been lazy and decided to go for my
swim the next day instead? I would have killed your passion, young lady. Surely
I would not be guilty, as I was unaware of the situation. But now, I know the
impact of my presence on you.
So, the next time anyone thinks of
herself as unworthy of making a difference, think again. I am proof of that.
(550 words)
Adapted from: Caren Alyssha Philip
Heart & Soul Star2 Sunday 27 May 2012
Sunday, 4 November 2012
Nautical Expressions
(To show/fly a) false flag
To
pretend to be something you are not
Cars are identified by their license
plates; ships use flags. In the old days, pirates would check out the
nationality of their quarry, run up either the same flag or one of a trusted
ally, get in nice and close, and then launch their attack.
Example: Our CEO got caught in false flag operation.
He thought she was an investment banker but she was actually working for one of
our rivals.
To take the
wind out of someone’s sails
To depress someone. To bring someone
down.
A sailing ship can only travel when
the wind fills its sails. The sight of a sailing ship suddenly coming to a
stop, its sails dangling uselessly, inspired this idiom. A captain may use his
ship to block the wind, thereby forcing a rival to come to a halt.
Example: Discovering
we all have MBAs really took the wind out of Jeff’s sails.
To run a
tight ship
To be very organised and efficient.
In the old days, ship captains may or
may not have been efficient but they were certainly cruel. One of the many
legal punishments was keelhauling, where sailors were tied up, thrown overboard
and dragged underwater from one side of the ship to the other so that they will
be scarred or even killed by the sharp barnacles on the keel or bottom.
Example:
Jack runs a tight ship so we should cut our overheads drastically.
To sail
close to the wind
To do something dangerous. Also to do
something that is within the rules – but only just!
A sail boat can only move if the wind
fills its sails. Therefore, if you sail directly into the wind, the air will
slide past your sails rather than fill them, and you will come to a stop. You
may even be blown backwards!
Example:
Sue-Anne enjoys sailing close to the wind but her mum is worried she'll land
herself in trouble one day.
Adapted from: Ellen Whyte Logomania
Star2 Tuesday 4 Spetember 2012
Monday, 29 October 2012
How is the theme love shown in the novel you have read?
I have read the novel ‘Catch Us If You Can’ written by CatherineMacPhail.
It is an interesting novel. One of the
main messages the author highlights is that love is important in a family and
we should be willing to forgive our family for their wrongdoings.
Firstly, love between a grandparent and a
grandchild.
Granda loves Rory. To him,
Rory is his son. Rory and Granda share an amazing family love for each other,
Their love is deep and pure. Granda has been taking care of Rory ever since
Rory’s mother passed away and his father walked out of their life. Granda sees
to the needs of Rory in schooling and goes to see the class teacher whenever
being called such as Parents’ Night. Rory also loves his grandfather. Rory will
do anything to care for Granda and make him happy. He readily sacrifices his
love for football and to be on the school football team so that he has time to
care for Granda. Their love surpasses most level people are capable of family
love. This is because of the unique situation the boy and his grandfather are
in. Because of this love, they are willing to run away in order not to be
separated. They shun the safety of the children’s home (Castle Street) and old
folks home (Rachnadar).
Next, love between friends.
Here Rory loves and is loved
by his friends such as Tyrone and Darren. Darren gives the key of his mom’s
caravan to Rory in the Great Escape. Tyrone along with his parents, Ruby and
Sammy, help Granda and Rory in their journey because he could empathise with
Rory and his Granda. These people believe that Rory and his grandfather are
doing the right thing to stay together and they do not expect to be paid for
helping Rory and Granda.
Then, Tyrone’s family too portrays family love.
They are a loving and
close-knit family. Sammy is the head of the family and a good provider. Ruby
sees to the family’s everyday needs. Tyrone tells Rory that he will never part
from his parents. It is his fear too that one day he will be taken away from
them by the authorities. Like Rory, he will never allow this to happen.
Lastly, we also see the love shown by the public .
Their journey is a struggle
to stay free. Strangers help them all the way, giving them shelter and making
safe plans for them. Rab, the petrol station owner, gives shelter to the runaways knowing that
they are in trouble. He and his girlfriend, Annie helps Granda and Rory cross
the Borders to enter England and seeks Annie’s cousin’s help. Norma and her daughter, Nicola, allow Rory and
Granda to stay overnight at their house in Lake District.
As a conclusion, the theme
love is shown between the main character, Rory and the people surrounding him
that is his grandfather, his best friend and new friends like Tyrone and his
family, and strangers like Rab and friends.
It is true that ‘love does
not count’ and ‘a friend in need is a friend indeed’.
In my opinion, family
relationships should be nurtured and not taken for granted as family happiness
and stability depend on this positive attitude.
Adapted from : Modul Pecutan Akhir SPM JPN Kelantan 2012)
Friday, 19 October 2012
English, The Language of Opportunities
If you meet a fellow Malaysian and he
doesn’t understand English, chances are you’ll be conversing in Bahasa Melayu.
Young or old, rich or poor, city or ‘kampung’ folk, all of us have at least
basic knowledge of our national language.
Our parents spoke Bahasa Melayu. Our
neighbours would yell, ‘Hujan mari!’, or maybe ‘Hujan mali!’, and we always
knew what it meant: drop everything and take in the clothes. In school, we
greeted our class teacher with a loud ‘Selamat pagi, Cikgu!’ regardless whether
he or she was a Malay, Chinese, Indian, or any other race.
From schools to universities to
offices to retirement homes, our beloved language holds a special place in our
hearts. We sang ‘Negaraku’ together, cheered for the Malaysian Tigers, laughed
and cried in front of the television watching P Ramlee or a Yasmin Ahmad
commercial or one of the more current films. And even when we speak in English
or Cantonese or Tamil, we still use Bahasa Melayu to some degree.
Its grammar, vocabulary and
pronunciation are unlike any in the world. That’s why you teach it to your
children and encourage them to do the same to theirs. Having said that, do not
stop them from learning English as well.
Over 1.8 billion people speak and
understand English. That’s one fourth of the world’s population. Just think
about the places your children could explore, people they will meet, stories
they will hear.
English is the common language in
almost every endeavour, from science to air traffic control to diplomacy. It is
spoken at some of the best universities, during job interviews and in hospitals
everywhere. 80% of the world’s electronically-stored information is in English.
It is also the dominant language of the Internet.
Scholars and researchers are already
calling it the world’s first truly global language. Like football, English
belongs to everybody and nobody at the same time. More non-native speakers of
the language (that’s us) are shaping and remaking it every day, creating new
words or giving new meanings to old ones.
Sir Richard Branson famously compared
opportunities to buses: ‘There is always another one coming.’ Quite true.
Except that by having command of both Bahasa Melayu and English, your child won’t
have to wait for the transport. Instead, the bus will be waiting for him. And
who knows how far he’ll go?
(401 words)
Adapted from: English For More
Opportunities Star2 Sunday 2 September 2012
Nature - Questions
What are the 4 seasons mentioned in
the poem?
Winter, Spring, Summer, Autumn
What are the 2 colours mentioned in
the poem?
Yellow, Green
Name the parts of the poem that are
related to the sense of sound
The sound of
rain beating down hard on the rooftops like bullets on the roofs
The swish of
water in the gullies
The sound of
bees
Name 2 types of
plants or crops mentioned in the poem
Sugar
cane/Guango trees/Mango/Logwood/Buttercups
Name 2
different types of days mentioned in the poem
Sunny days/Rainy
days/Windy days/Days when there are storms/Days when the leaves fall from the
mango and the logwood blossom
How do you
think the persona feels about the natural beauty of his country?
He is proud,
joyful and exultant
Adapted from : STAR-NIE 19 September
2012
Nature
This poem reflects the persona’s
pride in his country’s natural beauty. It celebrates the natural beauty of
Jamaica in a joyous and exultant mood. The many aspects of Jamaican nature are
beautifully described.
Despite not having the seasonal
changes of winter, spring, summer and autumn, Jamaica has its own cycle of
changes. This is vividly described in the different days that Jamaica
experiences; bright hot sunny days to rainy days when the earth lies fallow until
it bursts with activity and beauty again.
We are shown images of tropical
rainstorms and strong winds that threaten to uproot trees as well as the
scorching heat from the sun that shines down on green cane fields
We are taken to the next change of
season when leaves fade and fall off from trees, only to have our senses waken
once again when the logwood blossoms and the bushes come alive with the sound
of buzzing bees and the smell of honey.
The final, almost breath-taking,
image is of the earth being paved with yellow stars.
Adapted from : STAR-NIE 19 September
2012
He Had Such Quiet Eyes - Questions
In the first
stanza, what other words can you use to replace the word ‘quiet’ in the phrase ‘quiet
eyes’ without changing the intended meaning?
Deceptive/Dishonest/Pretending/Devious/Misleading/False
What do
these lines mean?
They were two pools of lies
Layered with thinnest eyes
Danger lurked
beneath the seemingly calm and sincere demeanour of the boy/man
She’d be free from the ‘hows and the whys’. Write 2
possible questions that could have been asked by the girl.
How could I
have been so trusting?
Why did he
leave me?
How could he
have done this to me?
Why was I so
blind?
What do you think the line ‘Be sure that nice really means nice’ from the poem means?
Being friendly
and cordial with a man is fine as long as there are no hidden motives or expectations
on his part for casual, physical intimacy.
Adapted from : STAR-NIE, 19 September
2012
He Had Such Quiet Eyes
The poem describes how a girl is
deceived by the appearance of a seemingly sincere man. She eventually succumbs
to his desires for physical intimacy. She does this despite warnings and advice
from others about the possible dangers and consequences of being too trusting
and naive.
She regrets later when she realises
how she has been taken in by his false expressions of yearning for her. The
poem ends with advice given to women; fleeting heartbreaks when relationships
fall apart are better options in comparison to the folly of naivety.
Adapted from : STAR-NIE, 19 September
2012
Are You Still Playing Your Flute?
In the first stanza, the persona
feels guilt in longing for the song of the flautist. The persona continues to
pen about a conscience that is disturbed, in the third stanza.
What do you think is the reason
behind the persona’s feelings of guilt and a disturbed conscience?
The reason she feels guilty in the
first stanza could be because it is she who has distanced herself from her
beloved. She therefore feels that she should not be longing for the melody of
the flute nor the flautist himself. In the third stanza, her conscience is
possibly troubled because her thoughts keep returning to the flautist despite
the knowledge that there are more pressing and urgent matters that demand her
attention.
The last line of the poem states:
This world is too old and bleeding
This line makes reference to a world
that seems ‘wounded’ and depleted. It has aged and lost its prime and freshness.
There is only heartache and trouble now. In the lines before this, the persona
also mentions violence, unemployment and political disunity.
Adapted from: STAR-NIE 19 September 2012
Adapted from: STAR-NIE 19 September 2012
Friday, 12 October 2012
Modern Day Frog Prince
“Helen dear, why
is there a frog on the chair next to you?” the king, who had just sat down for
the midday meal, asked his beautiful daughter.
With downcast
eyes, the princess shifted uncomfortably in her seat and kept quiet. The little
batrachian creature with shiny eyes and a green mottled coat explained, “This
morning, the princess lost her golden ball when it rolled into the pond,
dimpled its surface and disappeared completely.
Diving into a
pond to recover things is my strong point, and I was delighted when the
princess gave me her word of honour that I could live with her if I
retrieved the plaything for her. But she reneged on her promise, Your Majesty.
She said to me, “ Buzz off – I have other fish to fry.”
“Is that true?”
the king asked the princess. She nodded and said, “ I wouldn’t be seen dead
with a frog.” Placing an arthritic arm over her shoulder, the king said, “Promises
should never be broken.”
With a grim
expression, the princess invited the frog to jump onto the table. “What’s this
in the golden bowl?” the frog asked, as glutinous saliva dribbled from his
mouth. “Vegetable soup,” said the king. “For an amphibian, it could be an acquired
taste.”
As the frog
slurped his food, making swishing sounds like water purling between rocks, the
princess said to her father, “ For crying out loud, our tablemate doesn’t
care that it is bad manners to break your bread or roll in your soup!”
After lunch, the
princess reluctantly invited her guest to her room. When he hopped onto her
bed, she couldn’t control herself anymore. Gritting her teeth, she picked him
up and deposited him on the floor. And the frog turned into a wispy cloud of
smoke, which instantly metamorphosed into a handsome prince dressed in his best
bib and tucker!
The princess
smiled in relief when the prince told her that a wicked witch had cast a spell
on him that could only be broken by the touch of a princess. Her brow
corrugating, she asked, “Will you turn into a frog again?” “ Definitely not!”
said the prince. “What is more, I intend to ask a beautiful princess to
marry me!”
One’s strong
point – something at which one excels
word of honour –
a sincere promise
buzz off – go away
have
other/bigger fish to fry – to have more important matters to attend to
wouldn’t be seen
dead – would have nothing to do with; strongly dislike
acquired taste –
something one learns to like over time
for crying out
loud – an exclamation of irritation or exasperation
one’s best bib
and tucker – one’s finest clothes
what’s more –
also/furthermore
(459 words)
Adapted from: Idiomania
Star2 Tuesday 28 August 2012
Ways To Improve English
Dimitar
Berbatov, the handsome Bulgarian football player worked on improving his
English by watching the Godfather films again and again, especially Godfather
III.
We are told that
there are four skills to be developed in the teaching of a language: Reading,
Writing, Listening and Speaking. Let me try and suggest certain ways in which
we can improve our understanding and command of the language.
Reading
Read books whose
subjects interest you, and try if possible to get some advice on whether the
books you have chosen are written well. Also, choose books whose language
provides some challenge to you, but not too much, because that might discourage
you. If there are 10 or more words on every page that you don’t know the
meaning of, find a simpler book.
Sometimes you
may hear of a good classic English novel, like Oliver Twist by Charles Dickens,
and you can’t find it in a bookshop. There is also no library near you. You can
go to the Project Gutenberg website. Here you can find lots and lots of good books. You can read them online or
print them, all for free. But if you have some money to spare, you are encouraged
to donate any sum you like to the project. The books have been made available
by people who have lovingly typed every word in so that these treasures can be
read by everyone.
Dictionaries
Reading alone is
not enough, of course. I really do think that Malaysians have to develop the
dictionary habit. I have observed how reluctant so many Malaysians are to look
up a word in a dictionary to find out its exact meaning or meanings.
This is such a
pity because never before we had so many free dictionaries available, on the
Internet. So please take advantage of that. Some of them even pronounce the
words for you if you click on the right icons.
Writing
How about
improving your writing? If you have no tutor or a friend to help you, just
write a diary. You don’t need to write every day. But whenever you feel happy
or upset or angry about something, try to write how you feel in your diary.
Never mind if it
is somewhat ungrammatical at first: you will get better as you read more and
write more. And if you feel upset or angry, writing it all down may actually
help you feel less upset or angry.
Speaking
Speaking may be the
skill that is hardest to improve. Having a friend who is proficient in English
would be helpful. If you don’t have such a friend, try getting a tutor, if you
can afford it.
If you have
neither friend of that description, nor cash to pay for a tutor, don’t despair.
If you listen to the language often enough, you can try to speak it on your own.
Try reading aloud in the privacy of your home or room. It can be enjoyable.
Finally, what about grammar? The BBC website has a grammar section and you can
also try to get a grammar book from a big bookshop. Browse around and find one
that you think is at your level and also affordable.
(536 words)
Adapted from:
Fadzilah Amin Mind Our English Star2 Tuesday 28 August 2012
Sunday, 7 October 2012
Stress
Stress is not an alien term to anyone. As teenagers, we often put up
with stress on a daily basis. I remembered how my mum used to tell me without
hesitating to repeat it over and over again: “Those days, we could not even
afford a hand phone. Even if we did, they would not fit into our pockets. You
are so lucky nowadays.”
I do not give two hoots about my mother’s rants as much as the next
teenager, but what she said does apply. Being born into a fortunate era has
made most of us more vulnerable and easily threatened by obstacles.
Just think about it, every little thing in our daily lives appears
stressful to us. Woke up 30 minutes late on a Chemistry quiz day? Stress. Got
to school and realised you did not study section 3.5 on page 154? Stress. Could
not find a single 2B pencil in your bag during the PMR objective test? Stress.
Had a public fight with your girlfriend in the hall right after your test
without knowing what you were fighting about afterwards? STRESS,
It is simply too easy to trigger that little stress button at the
back of our minds. It all builds up to form stressors, and stressors, of
course, cause stress that encourages people to act out in unfavourable ways.
The first step to overcome stress is to learn more about it. Things
would be more manageable when we realise what we are actually dealing
with. Prioritising and time management helps
as well , as it helps us determine what is most important, and what we should
avoid fussing over.
For example, realising that the Chemistry quiz tomorrow is vital to
your studies will steer you towards making the right decision to turn down the
outing to town with your friends. By doing so, you’d have ample time to go
through section 3.5 on page 154 at least three times, wake up 30 minutes
earlier on the test day and packed extra 2B pencils, all nicely sharpened;
finish your test 10 minutes earlier and not bump into your girlfriend in the
hall. What seemed to be a strenuous and hectic day would simply turn
stress-free without us having to completely reconstruct our lives.
Stress is born in the brain and it wounds the brain. Therefore,
another effective option to combat stress is to stay positive. You may be
thinking, “easier said than done”. I agree. But by mentally convincing
ourselves that there are some things that we cannot control, we can minimise
potential heartache when it comes to dealing with dissatisfying outcomes.
We have to also understand that stress isn’t always the enemy.
Positive stress helps us strive, and can act as motivation. But as we all know,
too much of a good thing gives an opposite effect. We should never let stress
conquer our minds or be the excuse to bring out the worst in us.
As entrepreneur and lifestyle author Bill Phillips said, ‘stress
should be a powerful driving force, not an obstacle”. Don’t let stress dominate
you; be its master instead. Have a happy stress-free life!
(522 words)
Writer: Carmen Khor, Sunway University
Adapted from : R.AGE Star 2 Friday 14 September 2012
Sunday, 2 September 2012
Word Power 1
WORD POWER 1
Crambazzled
(adjective)
- prematurely aged by drinking
Origin : Yorkshire slang. 19th
century English.
Example: Keith Richards looked crambazzled after a
lifetime of rock ‘n’ roll.
Ostrobogulous
(adjective)
-bizarre
Origin : Unknown
Example : Her whimsical book contained many
ostrobogulous drawings.
Fornale
(verb)
- spend money before you’ve earned it
Origin: 15th century English
Example: When the ship docked, the sailors
fornaled two days before payday.
Cagg
(noun)
- vow not to get drunk
Origin: Military slang. 19th
century English
Example:
Macrology
(noun)
- tedious and empty talk
Origin: Greek macros (long) and logos
(word)
Example: The party was rich in macrology.
Accidie
(noun)
-apathy
Origin: Latin accidia (listlessness)
Example: His accidie deepened as he waited on
Platform 8.
Quidnunc
(noun)
- someone desperate to know what’s going on
Origin: Latin quid nunc (what now?)
Example:
Dudgeon
(noun)
- resentful anger
Origin: Old English (the wood used to make
dagger hilts)
Example: He stormed off the American Idol
set in high dudgeon.
Deipnosophist
(noun)
- brilliant dining companion
Origin: Greek deipnon (dinner) and sophos
(wise)
Example: The deipnosophist made up for the
salmon mousse.
Cachinnate
(verb)
- laugh loudly
Origin: Latin chachinnare (laugh loudly)
Example:
Dundrearies
(noun)
- long side-whiskers
Origin: Victorian English(Lord Dundreary in
the 1858 play our American Cousin)
Example:
Godwottery
(noun)
- pretentious use of old language
Origin: 19th century English
exclamation, ‘God wot!’
Example: Stephen Fry likes to mock
godwottery on television.
Philtrum
(noun)
- groove below the nose
Origin: Latin philtrum
Example: There was a thin moustache
nestling on his philtrum.
Smidsy
(noun)
- a motorbike accident
Origin: 20th century acronym
(Sorry Mate, I Didn’t See You)\
Example: The greasy road surface led to a
boom in smidsies.
Brendice
(noun)
- cup used to drink to another’s health
Origin: 17th century English
Example: We raised a brendice to absent
friends.
Taken from : Reader's Digest April 2011
Friday, 10 August 2012
Horses
1. To get off/on your high horse (also
to climb off/on your high horse)
To
stop/put on a superior or arrogant manner
Seated high up on a horse, you
automatically have to look down to talk to people who are walking. Whether you
mean it or not, those looking up can easily assume you are talking down to them
in a rather snooty manner.
Another factor is that horses
have always been expensive and therefore the province of the rich – a group not
universally noted for their humility.
Example: I
wish that politician would get off his high horse and deal with real people and
real problems.
2. To change
horses (in) mid-stream
To change your ideas, focus in
the middle of a project, race or other venture.
The appealing image of trying to
swap horses without getting soaked has undoubtedly kept this phrase in the
public eye.
Example: The
company is stuck with this software because it’s too tough to change horses in
midstream.
3. To flog a
dead horse
To try and revive interest in a
subject that nobody cares about OR to talk about something that has been
discussed at great deal.
Imagine in your mind this
horrible image of beating a dead horse in order to make it work.
Example:
Whether you like it or not, Kim has been promoted. So stop flogging a dead
horse, will you?
4. To be on
your hobby horse
To talk about a favourite
subject – usually one that bores everyone else because you’ve talked about it
too much!
Example: Warn
Syed not to mention car race or we’ll have Grandpa on his hobby horse again.
5. Horses for
courses
Something you say to mean that
what is easy for some, is difficult for others.
Trainers test a horse for its
stamina, speed and other attributes and then decide what sort of races they
think the horse will do well at. Many people also believe that certain horses
do better at particular tracks.
Example: You
can’t switch from accounts to customer service because our CEO believes in
horses for courses.
6. To pony up
To pay. Usually used in the
sense of paying an outstanding bill or debt.
This expression is linked to the
late 1790s where a pony was slang for 25 guineas, an English gold coin.
Example: It’s
George’s turn to pony up for this round.
7. Don’t look
a gift horse in the mouth
It is unwise to be ungrateful
for a gift. Also a warning that it is rude to evaluate a gift.
Based on the fact that
equestrians can tell how old (and therefore how valuable) a horse is by looking
at its teeth.
Example: When
Salina got a whopping great Hari Raya bonus she didn’t look a gift horse in the
mouth and suggest they have overpaid her.
Adapted from: Mind Our English, Star2, Wednesday 27 July 2011
Tuesday, 17 July 2012
Essay Writing Competition (20 June-31 October 2012)
Write on one of the titles below:
Essay:
Esei:
Category A (13 – 17 years old)
Kategori A (13-17 tahun)
Choose one of the following titles:
Pilih salah satu daripada tajuk-tajuk berikut:
What being a responsible Malaysian citizen means to me
Pandangan saya berkenaan ertinya menjadi rakyat Malaysia yang bertanggungjawab.
How can Malaysian schools promote responsible citizenship?
Bagaimanakah caranya sekolah-sekolah di Malaysia boleh menggalakkan kerakyatan bertanggungjawab?
Category B (18 – 25 years old)
Kategori B (18-25 tahun)
Choose one of the following titles:
Pilih salah satu daripada tajuk-tajuk berikut:
How has the Internet changed or affected citizen engagement and empowerment in Malaysia?
Bagaimanakah Internet telah mengubah atau memberi kesan kepada keterlibatan dan pemerkasaan rakyat di Malaysia?
It has been said that the era of Government-Knows-Best is over. What do you think are the implications of this?
Telah dikatakan bahawa era “Government-Knows-Best” telah berlalu. Apakah implikasi-implikasi pernyataan tersebut?
Blogpost:
Blogpost:
Category A (13 – 17 years old)
Kategori A (13-17 tahun)
Write an open letter addressed to your friends and schoolmates on the role they can play as young citizens and what they can do – now – to shape a better future for Malaysia.
Tuliskan sepucuk surat terbuka yang ditujukan kepada kawan-kawan dan rakan-rakan sekolah berkenaan peranan yang boleh mereka mainkan sebagai warganegara muda dan apa yang boleh mereka lakukan – sekarang – bagi membentuk masa hadapan Malaysia yang lebih cemerlang.
Category B (18 – 25 years old)
Kategori B (18-25 tahun)
If you were given the funding and resources to set up a new youth-based civil society action group to influence public policy on a pressing issue affecting youth, what organisation would you set up and which cause would it champion?
Jika anda diberikan dana dan sumber-sumber untuk menubuhkan sebuah kumpulan bertindak belia masyarakat sivil yang baru, bagi mempengaruhi dasar awam yang menyentuh isu-isu mendesak berkaitan belia, organisasi apakah akan anda tubuhkan dan tujuan apakah yang akan ia perjuangkan?
http://www.perdana.org.my/essaycompetition/to-participate/terms-conditions/
This competition is open to Malaysian citizens only.
The competition is open to all Malaysians between the ages 13 to 25 as of 31 December 2012.
Malaysian students studying abroad may enter but their institutions are not eligible for any of the institution prizes.
Submissions will be accepted until 31 October 2012.
Each participant may submit more than one entry, but each winning Participant will be entitled to only one (1) prize. The prize will be awarded to a winning Participant for the Participant’s highest-scoring Competition Entry.
Submissions can be made online or via e-mail, in English and Bahasa Malaysia.
Each participant must fill in a submission form to accompany each entry on the Essay website.
Essays are accepted in the .doc, .docx or .pdf format.
All submissions will be blind reviewed. References to specific individuals, firms, or schools, which might reveal the author’s identity, are discouraged. It is not allowed to indicate your name anywhere on your work.Quotes and references must be clearly marked throughout the essay and properly cited.
All submissions must be original. No previously published material will be accepted. Any form of plagiarism will result in automatic disqualification. Please note that all essays will be screened with specialised software to verify plagiarism.
The contest is open to all young Malaysians, students and non-students, aged between 13 and 25, as of 31 October 2012.
Employees of Perdana Leadership Foundation (“PLF”), MAYBANK FOUNDATION and MPH and their immediate families are not eligible to participate in the competition.
Please note: Malaysian students studying abroad may enter the competition but their institutions are not eligible for any of the institution prizes. Non-student participants will also not be eligible for any of the institution prizes.
Essay:
Esei:
Category A (13 – 17 years old)
Kategori A (13-17 tahun)
Choose one of the following titles:
Pilih salah satu daripada tajuk-tajuk berikut:
What being a responsible Malaysian citizen means to me
Pandangan saya berkenaan ertinya menjadi rakyat Malaysia yang bertanggungjawab.
How can Malaysian schools promote responsible citizenship?
Bagaimanakah caranya sekolah-sekolah di Malaysia boleh menggalakkan kerakyatan bertanggungjawab?
Category B (18 – 25 years old)
Kategori B (18-25 tahun)
Choose one of the following titles:
Pilih salah satu daripada tajuk-tajuk berikut:
How has the Internet changed or affected citizen engagement and empowerment in Malaysia?
Bagaimanakah Internet telah mengubah atau memberi kesan kepada keterlibatan dan pemerkasaan rakyat di Malaysia?
It has been said that the era of Government-Knows-Best is over. What do you think are the implications of this?
Telah dikatakan bahawa era “Government-Knows-Best” telah berlalu. Apakah implikasi-implikasi pernyataan tersebut?
Blogpost:
Blogpost:
Category A (13 – 17 years old)
Kategori A (13-17 tahun)
Write an open letter addressed to your friends and schoolmates on the role they can play as young citizens and what they can do – now – to shape a better future for Malaysia.
Tuliskan sepucuk surat terbuka yang ditujukan kepada kawan-kawan dan rakan-rakan sekolah berkenaan peranan yang boleh mereka mainkan sebagai warganegara muda dan apa yang boleh mereka lakukan – sekarang – bagi membentuk masa hadapan Malaysia yang lebih cemerlang.
Category B (18 – 25 years old)
Kategori B (18-25 tahun)
If you were given the funding and resources to set up a new youth-based civil society action group to influence public policy on a pressing issue affecting youth, what organisation would you set up and which cause would it champion?
Jika anda diberikan dana dan sumber-sumber untuk menubuhkan sebuah kumpulan bertindak belia masyarakat sivil yang baru, bagi mempengaruhi dasar awam yang menyentuh isu-isu mendesak berkaitan belia, organisasi apakah akan anda tubuhkan dan tujuan apakah yang akan ia perjuangkan?
http://www.perdana.org.my/essaycompetition/to-participate/terms-conditions/
This competition is open to Malaysian citizens only.
The competition is open to all Malaysians between the ages 13 to 25 as of 31 December 2012.
Malaysian students studying abroad may enter but their institutions are not eligible for any of the institution prizes.
Submissions will be accepted until 31 October 2012.
Each participant may submit more than one entry, but each winning Participant will be entitled to only one (1) prize. The prize will be awarded to a winning Participant for the Participant’s highest-scoring Competition Entry.
Submissions can be made online or via e-mail, in English and Bahasa Malaysia.
Each participant must fill in a submission form to accompany each entry on the Essay website.
Essays are accepted in the .doc, .docx or .pdf format.
All submissions will be blind reviewed. References to specific individuals, firms, or schools, which might reveal the author’s identity, are discouraged. It is not allowed to indicate your name anywhere on your work.Quotes and references must be clearly marked throughout the essay and properly cited.
All submissions must be original. No previously published material will be accepted. Any form of plagiarism will result in automatic disqualification. Please note that all essays will be screened with specialised software to verify plagiarism.
The contest is open to all young Malaysians, students and non-students, aged between 13 and 25, as of 31 October 2012.
Employees of Perdana Leadership Foundation (“PLF”), MAYBANK FOUNDATION and MPH and their immediate families are not eligible to participate in the competition.
Please note: Malaysian students studying abroad may enter the competition but their institutions are not eligible for any of the institution prizes. Non-student participants will also not be eligible for any of the institution prizes.
Saturday, 30 June 2012
Titles for Narrative Writing
Write a story that ends with:
...If only I had listened to his/her advice
Write a story ending with:
...We had never laughed so much in our lives.
Write a story ending with:
...If only I had been more careful, that wouldn’t have happened.
Write a story beginning with:
I was nervous when the door opened...
Write a story ending with:
...We said our goodbyes and went our separate ways
Write a story beginning with:
It had been raining all day...
Write a story ending with:
...I shall never forget this day for the rest of my life.
Write a story beginning with:
I could not believe my eyes...
Write a story beginning with:
The lights suddenly went out...
Write a story ending with:
...She is a different person now and it shows.
Write a story ending with:
...They looked at each other and smiled.
Write a story beginning with:
I wish he would give me a second chance...
Write a story ending with:
...Finally I have achieved my greatest triumph
Write a story beginning with:
I didn’t know what happiness what until...
Write a story ending with:
...I realised that every word she said was true
Write a story ending with:
...I learnt my lesson.
Write a story beginning with:
The crowd had not dwindled...
Write a story ending with:
...We wished we could have stayed there a few days more
Write a story beginning with:
It was Sunday morning...
Write a story beginning with:
In my haste, I disregarded everything else...
Write a story ending with:
...We enjoyed ourselves thoroughly that day
Write a story beginning with:
It was a dark and stormy night...
Write a story beginning with:
It was a bitter cold morning...
Write a story beginning with:
I did not expect this to happen...
Write a story beginning with:
When I opened my eyes, I realised that...
Write a story beginning with:
I could tell that my friend was excited...
Write a story beginning with:
I approached the young man with a smile...
Write a story ending with:
...I wished that I had never said those words
Write a story beginning with:
Our last day on the island was...
Write a story beginning with:
There were screams all around me...
Write a story beginning with:
My heart was beating very fast when I...
Write a story beginning with:
As I walked along the beach, I saw something shiny...
Write a story ending with:
...I miss my family
Write a story ending with:
...The incident had made me wiser
Write a story beginning with:
Yesterday, all my troubles seemed so far away...
...If only I had listened to his/her advice
Write a story ending with:
...We had never laughed so much in our lives.
Write a story ending with:
...If only I had been more careful, that wouldn’t have happened.
Write a story beginning with:
I was nervous when the door opened...
Write a story ending with:
...We said our goodbyes and went our separate ways
Write a story beginning with:
It had been raining all day...
Write a story ending with:
...I shall never forget this day for the rest of my life.
Write a story beginning with:
I could not believe my eyes...
Write a story beginning with:
The lights suddenly went out...
Write a story ending with:
...She is a different person now and it shows.
Write a story ending with:
...They looked at each other and smiled.
Write a story beginning with:
I wish he would give me a second chance...
Write a story ending with:
...Finally I have achieved my greatest triumph
Write a story beginning with:
I didn’t know what happiness what until...
Write a story ending with:
...I realised that every word she said was true
Write a story ending with:
...I learnt my lesson.
Write a story beginning with:
The crowd had not dwindled...
Write a story ending with:
...We wished we could have stayed there a few days more
Write a story beginning with:
It was Sunday morning...
Write a story beginning with:
In my haste, I disregarded everything else...
Write a story ending with:
...We enjoyed ourselves thoroughly that day
Write a story beginning with:
It was a dark and stormy night...
Write a story beginning with:
It was a bitter cold morning...
Write a story beginning with:
I did not expect this to happen...
Write a story beginning with:
When I opened my eyes, I realised that...
Write a story beginning with:
I could tell that my friend was excited...
Write a story beginning with:
I approached the young man with a smile...
Write a story ending with:
...I wished that I had never said those words
Write a story beginning with:
Our last day on the island was...
Write a story beginning with:
There were screams all around me...
Write a story beginning with:
My heart was beating very fast when I...
Write a story beginning with:
As I walked along the beach, I saw something shiny...
Write a story ending with:
...I miss my family
Write a story ending with:
...The incident had made me wiser
Write a story beginning with:
Yesterday, all my troubles seemed so far away...
Wednesday, 27 June 2012
'I did not know what happiness was until...'
I didn’t know what happiness was until the unfortunate mishap. I have never been disappointed by the beauty of mother nature. It has taught me a lot about appreciating God’s gifts.
The story began on a bright Friday morning. I packed my bags and was ready to take on the adventure of camping in the jungle. At first, I was reluctant to go but after being cajoled by my persistent friends, I finally gave in. It was a trip for sheer relaxation and nature learning. All six of us – Ainul, Dayang, Farah, Suhaila, Yus and I finally agreed to meet up at the school’s bus stop before embarking on our journey into the virgin forest.
As I was half way walking towards the school, it suddenly started raining. I hastened my steps to the school’s bus stand. Luckily for me, it started pouring when I arrived near the school. Only then, I realized that I was 10 minutes late for the meeting.
“Where have you been? We promised to be here at exactly 11 a.m.,” Ainul barked out.
“Sorry, I had to run some errands for my mom and there was a storm out there,” I explained. “Anyway, we’re all here. So, let’s not waste anymore time. Let’s go,” I quickly added so that Ainul would not dwell on the subject.
Thankfully, the rain lasted for five minutes only. We hopped onto a bus heading towards Indah Park. I was not sure if we were ready for a steep and winding climb up the hill in this wet condition. We arrived at the hillside alas and began to hike up about a mile of the Gagak trail.
It was a harsh climb as we were carrying heavy 10 kilo bag packs complete with sleeping bags, canned food and bottles of mineral water. I was the only one bringing the tent as the others did not possess one. Along the climb we stopped to rest for at least three times. At one place, we encountered a huge snake hissing at us from a bush about 10 metres away. We were lucky not to be bitten by it. We caught glimpse of the beautiful hornbills, bluebirds and a Rufous Collared Kingfisher. After approximately forty minutes of walking, we finally arrived at our destination, in the middle of an open forest quite near to the breathtaking Indah Waterfall.
“Now, let’s start pitching the tent,” Yus ordered. We loyally obeyed her command as we were the ones who chose her to be the group leader, being the oldest among us. It was already noon and we took out cans of sardines and loaves of bread for lunch before doing more exciting activities of discovering nature. Yus and Suhaila went to fetch some water, Farah and Ainul prepared the meal, Dayang laid out a mat for us to enjoy the moment of leisure in the forest. I was instructed to search for firewoods.
“Don’t go too far out,” Yus reminded.
Happily I went on my way gathering as many branches and twigs as I came across on my path. “This should be enough for at least two days,” I thought to myself as I had collected a bundle of them. As I turned around, I suddenly tripped over a branch and fell down flat on my leg. “Ouch! My ankle,” I moaned. I could not lift myself up as the pain on my twisted ankle was excruciating. I did not realize I was too far away from the tent. Moreover, I left my mobile with Yus. “How can I ask for help?” I wonder. At moment like this, all I could think of was my teacher’s advice. ‘If you are lost in the forest, you need to sit quietly at that particular spot until someone finds you. This will ease the searching work’. I did exactly that. Sit and wait.
Staring at the sky, it had grown darker. The dark grey cloud was pregnant with rain. I prayed hard that someone in my group would notice that I was missing.
Tick…tick…tick. The sound of water dropping onto the leaves. I gathered all my strength, lifted my hips and tried to move to a big tree nearby. Before I could even blink my eyes, the rain started pouring cats and dogs. I sat myself under the huge tree, holding the bundle of firewood to my chest. All kinds of thoughts came to my mind.
“I shouldn’t have come. There have been too many obstacles. It’s afternoon and it does not look like it,” I whined. Did I make the wrong decision? I questioned myself.
I must have dozed off. When I opened my eyes, the thick lianas hanging and gripping onto the hundred- foot-tall trees greeted me. I could hear the sound of the creatures of the forest. Insects chirping, the geckos in the hide calling. It was strangely soothing. I felt at peace as the symphony continued to play in my ears.
“Sheeda! Where are you?” Ainul’s call came piercing into my ears.
“Hey! I’m over here,” I shouted back in relief. I saw my friends running towards me. I told them what had happened. Dayang and Suhaila kindly helped me up while Ainul and Yus got into the motion of snapping pictures of the nature.
In the end, we spent the three-day break enjoying the beauty of mother nature. I realized that I had made the right decision.
By: Nursheeda (Form 5S1, 2010)
Taken from: http://smkmbi.blogspot.com/2011/02/continuous-writing-sample-narrative.html
The story began on a bright Friday morning. I packed my bags and was ready to take on the adventure of camping in the jungle. At first, I was reluctant to go but after being cajoled by my persistent friends, I finally gave in. It was a trip for sheer relaxation and nature learning. All six of us – Ainul, Dayang, Farah, Suhaila, Yus and I finally agreed to meet up at the school’s bus stop before embarking on our journey into the virgin forest.
As I was half way walking towards the school, it suddenly started raining. I hastened my steps to the school’s bus stand. Luckily for me, it started pouring when I arrived near the school. Only then, I realized that I was 10 minutes late for the meeting.
“Where have you been? We promised to be here at exactly 11 a.m.,” Ainul barked out.
“Sorry, I had to run some errands for my mom and there was a storm out there,” I explained. “Anyway, we’re all here. So, let’s not waste anymore time. Let’s go,” I quickly added so that Ainul would not dwell on the subject.
Thankfully, the rain lasted for five minutes only. We hopped onto a bus heading towards Indah Park. I was not sure if we were ready for a steep and winding climb up the hill in this wet condition. We arrived at the hillside alas and began to hike up about a mile of the Gagak trail.
It was a harsh climb as we were carrying heavy 10 kilo bag packs complete with sleeping bags, canned food and bottles of mineral water. I was the only one bringing the tent as the others did not possess one. Along the climb we stopped to rest for at least three times. At one place, we encountered a huge snake hissing at us from a bush about 10 metres away. We were lucky not to be bitten by it. We caught glimpse of the beautiful hornbills, bluebirds and a Rufous Collared Kingfisher. After approximately forty minutes of walking, we finally arrived at our destination, in the middle of an open forest quite near to the breathtaking Indah Waterfall.
“Now, let’s start pitching the tent,” Yus ordered. We loyally obeyed her command as we were the ones who chose her to be the group leader, being the oldest among us. It was already noon and we took out cans of sardines and loaves of bread for lunch before doing more exciting activities of discovering nature. Yus and Suhaila went to fetch some water, Farah and Ainul prepared the meal, Dayang laid out a mat for us to enjoy the moment of leisure in the forest. I was instructed to search for firewoods.
“Don’t go too far out,” Yus reminded.
Happily I went on my way gathering as many branches and twigs as I came across on my path. “This should be enough for at least two days,” I thought to myself as I had collected a bundle of them. As I turned around, I suddenly tripped over a branch and fell down flat on my leg. “Ouch! My ankle,” I moaned. I could not lift myself up as the pain on my twisted ankle was excruciating. I did not realize I was too far away from the tent. Moreover, I left my mobile with Yus. “How can I ask for help?” I wonder. At moment like this, all I could think of was my teacher’s advice. ‘If you are lost in the forest, you need to sit quietly at that particular spot until someone finds you. This will ease the searching work’. I did exactly that. Sit and wait.
Staring at the sky, it had grown darker. The dark grey cloud was pregnant with rain. I prayed hard that someone in my group would notice that I was missing.
Tick…tick…tick. The sound of water dropping onto the leaves. I gathered all my strength, lifted my hips and tried to move to a big tree nearby. Before I could even blink my eyes, the rain started pouring cats and dogs. I sat myself under the huge tree, holding the bundle of firewood to my chest. All kinds of thoughts came to my mind.
“I shouldn’t have come. There have been too many obstacles. It’s afternoon and it does not look like it,” I whined. Did I make the wrong decision? I questioned myself.
I must have dozed off. When I opened my eyes, the thick lianas hanging and gripping onto the hundred- foot-tall trees greeted me. I could hear the sound of the creatures of the forest. Insects chirping, the geckos in the hide calling. It was strangely soothing. I felt at peace as the symphony continued to play in my ears.
“Sheeda! Where are you?” Ainul’s call came piercing into my ears.
“Hey! I’m over here,” I shouted back in relief. I saw my friends running towards me. I told them what had happened. Dayang and Suhaila kindly helped me up while Ainul and Yus got into the motion of snapping pictures of the nature.
In the end, we spent the three-day break enjoying the beauty of mother nature. I realized that I had made the right decision.
By: Nursheeda (Form 5S1, 2010)
Taken from: http://smkmbi.blogspot.com/2011/02/continuous-writing-sample-narrative.html
'I did not know what happiness was until...'
I did not know what happiness was until my aunt’s caring words sank into me on my graduation day. There she was sitting on the front pew, looking at me with loving eyes, proudly as I stood on the stage giving a speech. She was my angel. She protected me and cared for me since the demise of my parents.
As an orphan, it was not easy for me to get acquainted to strangers. I had built a wall over the years to protect myself from being hurt. The fatal incident of a robbery left me broken and shattered. I could vividly remember the bloody tragedy. After my tuition class on Friday night, I came home in my friend’s car. When I arrived, I felt strange as mom and dad did not lock the door and left the gate wide open. Quietly and suspiciously, I walked into the house sensing something terrible might have happened. In front of the doorstep, to my horror were my parents and twin brothers sprawling right across the carpet. I was paralyzed with fear. Blood was oozing. Mom and dad were lying on their stomachs holding each other’s hands. My twin brothers were heavily injured with slashes of knife cuts on their heads and back.
“Wh-what’s going on?” I asked with a quivering voice. “Mom, dad, Habil, Qabil …please wake up,” I pleaded but they were motionless. It was a very horrifying scene. I found myself screaming and howling hysterically. My neighbours who came to help. The ambulance and police arrived within minutes but they were too late. I was so shaken that I could not stop crying. Not even the paramedic could calm me down. I was escorted to the hospital. Somehow, they managed to contact my aunt. Her hug and consoling words relaxed me a little. I was given a sedative jab and I fell asleep instantaneously. When I woke up, she was right there by my bedside. I felt safe and secured in her presence.
The police came to interview me. My aunt was with me all the while. I was kept away from the press and television for weeks for fear of my recurring hysteria. The doctor-in-charge put me in a psychiatric ward for half a year, under close observation to help me cope with the terribly haunting tragedy.
After six months in the psychiatry unit, I was finally discharged and reported as being in a stable condition. I went back to the house where the killing took place. It was a very emotional experience. Tears kept rolling down my eyes. I could not stop it. However, I was quiet and not hysterical anymore. My aunt was there holding my hands and rubbing my back, giving me all the moral support and love she could. I packed my belongings, took the family pictures hanging on the wall and put them in my bag. I was put under my aunt’s custody.
My parents and siblings were brutally killed in a home robbery. The prime suspects were two middled aged man. My parents were shot whereas my twin brothers were stabbed to death. It was reported that about RM20,000.00 worth of money and jewellery were stolen. They were finally arrested, convicted and sentenced to life imprisonment. Despite that, the life of my loved ones could not be returned.
“Hawa you must let go off the past. Don’t keep that hatred in your heart. Do not disappoint your late parents. You have a bright future ahead of you. Stay focused in your studies, pass with flying colours and live your life to the fullest. Realize your dreams of joining a forensic team. Make your parents and siblings proud of you. It’s not the end of the world. I’m still here for you,” she advised and encouraged me.
“…but I can’t forget them. Why me? Why my family?” I asked knowing that there was no answer to that.
“Who said that you must forget them? God loves them and that is why He took them in His care. You should be grateful that He still wants you to live their legacy, to care for the unfortunate. They would be sad if you keep wasting your youth away,” she rationalized with me and gave me a big hug to comfort me and take my doubts away.
Fortunately, her caring words and actions awakened me. I picked myself up from feeling worthless and hopeless. I was only fifteen then. However I strived hard and I succeeded.
Today, I am celebrating freedom. Freedom from the bondage of anger and hatred. And I am celebrating this new joy, this new me with my loving aunt. Without her support, I would not have made it.
By: Ainul (Form 5S1, 2010)
Taken from: http://smkmbi.blogspot.com/2011/02/continuous-writing-sample-narrative.html
As an orphan, it was not easy for me to get acquainted to strangers. I had built a wall over the years to protect myself from being hurt. The fatal incident of a robbery left me broken and shattered. I could vividly remember the bloody tragedy. After my tuition class on Friday night, I came home in my friend’s car. When I arrived, I felt strange as mom and dad did not lock the door and left the gate wide open. Quietly and suspiciously, I walked into the house sensing something terrible might have happened. In front of the doorstep, to my horror were my parents and twin brothers sprawling right across the carpet. I was paralyzed with fear. Blood was oozing. Mom and dad were lying on their stomachs holding each other’s hands. My twin brothers were heavily injured with slashes of knife cuts on their heads and back.
“Wh-what’s going on?” I asked with a quivering voice. “Mom, dad, Habil, Qabil …please wake up,” I pleaded but they were motionless. It was a very horrifying scene. I found myself screaming and howling hysterically. My neighbours who came to help. The ambulance and police arrived within minutes but they were too late. I was so shaken that I could not stop crying. Not even the paramedic could calm me down. I was escorted to the hospital. Somehow, they managed to contact my aunt. Her hug and consoling words relaxed me a little. I was given a sedative jab and I fell asleep instantaneously. When I woke up, she was right there by my bedside. I felt safe and secured in her presence.
The police came to interview me. My aunt was with me all the while. I was kept away from the press and television for weeks for fear of my recurring hysteria. The doctor-in-charge put me in a psychiatric ward for half a year, under close observation to help me cope with the terribly haunting tragedy.
After six months in the psychiatry unit, I was finally discharged and reported as being in a stable condition. I went back to the house where the killing took place. It was a very emotional experience. Tears kept rolling down my eyes. I could not stop it. However, I was quiet and not hysterical anymore. My aunt was there holding my hands and rubbing my back, giving me all the moral support and love she could. I packed my belongings, took the family pictures hanging on the wall and put them in my bag. I was put under my aunt’s custody.
My parents and siblings were brutally killed in a home robbery. The prime suspects were two middled aged man. My parents were shot whereas my twin brothers were stabbed to death. It was reported that about RM20,000.00 worth of money and jewellery were stolen. They were finally arrested, convicted and sentenced to life imprisonment. Despite that, the life of my loved ones could not be returned.
“Hawa you must let go off the past. Don’t keep that hatred in your heart. Do not disappoint your late parents. You have a bright future ahead of you. Stay focused in your studies, pass with flying colours and live your life to the fullest. Realize your dreams of joining a forensic team. Make your parents and siblings proud of you. It’s not the end of the world. I’m still here for you,” she advised and encouraged me.
“…but I can’t forget them. Why me? Why my family?” I asked knowing that there was no answer to that.
“Who said that you must forget them? God loves them and that is why He took them in His care. You should be grateful that He still wants you to live their legacy, to care for the unfortunate. They would be sad if you keep wasting your youth away,” she rationalized with me and gave me a big hug to comfort me and take my doubts away.
Fortunately, her caring words and actions awakened me. I picked myself up from feeling worthless and hopeless. I was only fifteen then. However I strived hard and I succeeded.
Today, I am celebrating freedom. Freedom from the bondage of anger and hatred. And I am celebrating this new joy, this new me with my loving aunt. Without her support, I would not have made it.
By: Ainul (Form 5S1, 2010)
Taken from: http://smkmbi.blogspot.com/2011/02/continuous-writing-sample-narrative.html
“... En. Nizam was grateful he had such good neighbours.”
Not even in his wildest dream did En. Nizam think he would lose so much in such a short time. It had been a trying period. When he got word that his father was on his death bed, En. Nizam’s family rushed to his hometown. Even before the funeral rites were over, he received a call from his immediate neighbour that his house was partly destroyed by fire and that the cause of the fire was believed to be arson.
Members of En. Nizam’s immediate family and his relatives were in state of disarray. First, it was the death of an elder member of a family, then this misfortune. Although En. Nizam was worried, deep in his heart he knew that he had very good neighbours, friends who would stand by him in good times and bad.
Sure enough, the minute he set foot in the compound of his house, he knew he was right. His neighbours, Mr. Subra and En. Majid, were there taking a close watch on the house. He learnt from them that the neighbours had been taking turns to keep an all-day vigil on the house. He thanked them from the bottom of his heart.
After inspecting the damage caused by the fire, En. Majid handed donations collected by the residents living in the area. His neighbours had passed the hat around and the donations came up to a significant amount. Although, the donations was still short of the amount required to repair the damages, en. Nazim was grateful.
The next day, En. Nazim was even more overwhelmed by the care and concern shown by his neighbours. They were there to extend their condolences and to show their support. Donations came pouring in. The women folk were busy preparing all the meals for the family.
With the help of his neighbours, En. Nizam got a building contractor to repair the damaged sections of the house. The repair and renovations took almost a week to complete. When the house was ready, the neighbour turned up in full force to congratulate him.
Tears welled up in E. Nizam’s eyes. He was at a loss for words. En. Nizam was grateful he had such good neighbours.
(367 words)
Taken from : http://englishforallsmkbenut.blogspot.com/p/spm-sample-of-essays-continuous-writing.html
Members of En. Nizam’s immediate family and his relatives were in state of disarray. First, it was the death of an elder member of a family, then this misfortune. Although En. Nizam was worried, deep in his heart he knew that he had very good neighbours, friends who would stand by him in good times and bad.
Sure enough, the minute he set foot in the compound of his house, he knew he was right. His neighbours, Mr. Subra and En. Majid, were there taking a close watch on the house. He learnt from them that the neighbours had been taking turns to keep an all-day vigil on the house. He thanked them from the bottom of his heart.
After inspecting the damage caused by the fire, En. Majid handed donations collected by the residents living in the area. His neighbours had passed the hat around and the donations came up to a significant amount. Although, the donations was still short of the amount required to repair the damages, en. Nazim was grateful.
The next day, En. Nazim was even more overwhelmed by the care and concern shown by his neighbours. They were there to extend their condolences and to show their support. Donations came pouring in. The women folk were busy preparing all the meals for the family.
With the help of his neighbours, En. Nizam got a building contractor to repair the damaged sections of the house. The repair and renovations took almost a week to complete. When the house was ready, the neighbour turned up in full force to congratulate him.
Tears welled up in E. Nizam’s eyes. He was at a loss for words. En. Nizam was grateful he had such good neighbours.
(367 words)
Taken from : http://englishforallsmkbenut.blogspot.com/p/spm-sample-of-essays-continuous-writing.html
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